Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Narrative essay ENG 82A

Zaid Althaer
Written communication ENG 82A
02- 05- 2009
Presentation

My first journey in USA
On day I had thought myself of getting the united states, it never came easier as I thought the issuance of visa wasn’t easy as well, I had to put all my documents together, before I can go to the embassy to apply for the issuance of visa, since I knew that it’s not easy to get the visa, I plan very much well to get all the necessary thing to be able to convince the authorities in the embassy. Lucky for me I went out to the embassy and filed my application, and I was given a date for my interview, that was two weeks for my application, it was very much anxious to be able to pass to the interview process, finally the date for the interview came by, I went to the interview without any hesitant of not getting the visa, I entered the office of the console and had the interview. Hold and behold in about twenty minutes the interview was over and I had my visa on my passport, I was full of happiness that what I had dreamt about is coming to pass. After my visa I went to book my airline ticket from Jordan to the United States, it was a smooth journey from my country to the USA (Chicago airport) in order to complete my journey to Florida, but my flight schedule was from Jordan to Chicago at 5pm and the transit to Florida was at 7pm. Finally I arrived Chicago airport, upon my arrival at Chicago airport I had to be in a cue waiting for my turn to be approved by the immigration officer, when it was my turn he looks so many times observing my passport, I was very nervous because I did not understand why is he taking too many times observation on my passport, and suddenly he told me to follow him which I did perfectly. I followed him to a different room where we met a superintendent officer, they spoke in a way that I never understood, I was asked to sit down by the officer, there was some interrogation by the officer, during this interrogation I was asked by one of the officer again from where I was essentially to another room, my heart was pounding because I have never ever experience such mishandling, I had to abide by what he told me, I had several questions bombard on me, which I gave the needed answers, one of the questions was that ( do you have any nephews in the united states ), at that moment I sat down for a while thinking about the question, immediately I said to him yes I had, he asked me who are they?, and my answer was that my uncle is the ambassador of my country to the USA (Washington) , and my father too was among the members of the police force in the early seventeen’s to participates a training with the USA, CIA department. After given out all these answers he done approved my arrival at Chicago airport. I was very much relief and kind of looking to myself. I went out of the room only to notice that my time for the transit is passed and I missed my flight. The option that I had was to book a new ticket to the next day, so that I can continue my journey to Florida, it wasn’t easy but I was glad to be in the United States.

Sunday, February 22, 2009

Chapter seven mind map ENG 82A


Chapter six mind map ENG 82A


Chapter five mind map ENG82 A


Chapter seven summaries ENG 82A

Chapter seven summaries
Submitting a final paper is the driving force behind writing, it explain why you may have spent so much time planning, drafting, and revising any essay or a paper in the first place to express your feeling and thoughts, the most important form of submitting is sharing a finished piece of writing with your instructor and writing peers, and it also the most helpful, you have to make sure to format your writing, which mean a good page design makes your writing clear and easy to follow, the submission method is appropriate for assignment, program, and goals, and its develop the skills, may this chapter show you how to prepare your writing for any audience.

Chapter six summaries ENG 82A

Chapter six summaries
In this chapter an author is talking about the Editing and proofreading. When you must prepare your writing, you must edit and proofread your revised writing so that it speaks clearly and accurately. When you edit, look first for words, phrases, checking for sentences style, avoid these sentence problems that sounds unclear. When you proofread, check your writing for spelling, and grammar errors. The Editing and proofreading are the second step after revising to look for any errors. I think that will help you avoiding mistakes and look over again.

Chapter five summaries ENG 82A

Chapter five summaries
In this chapter an author is talking about revising. Good writing almost always requires revising which help the writer to first drafts until he says exactly what he mean, examine your ideas, examine your thoughts. to prepare your writing effectively and carries out your message you advise to connect your ideas before you writing to determine what can be changed, what need to be added, what information needed to be appear, in order to get appropriate feedback and better respond .

Chapter one summaries ENG 82A

Chapter one summaries
The writer must always develop his text with awareness of reader’s perspective, and has to know firsthand what good reading is.We need to think through viewing, to read image actively, and to interpret what is meant by an image, viewing image will be using to identify the general impression and relate the image parts to one another.Critical thinking through writing must show the ability of thinking critically, be curious and ask why, what is creative, focus, and get involved.Thats will lead the audience to understand effectively.

Best regard
Zaid althaher

Chapter 13 mind map ENG 82A


Friday, February 20, 2009

Chapter 13 summaries ENG 82A

In this chapter an author is talking about comparison and contrasts the subjects which will help you first to determine and decide which similarities, in order to make the results more clarity, by analyzing, explaining, and describing. The goal of comparing and contrasting is to help the readers understand the topics, explore what is the point. To help achieve this there are keys have to be used, starting from knowing your reader, how to help readers use the information, what they know about the subject, and what they should know. Comparing subject’s show how they are similar, while contrasting them show how they are different, what I can see in this chapter that when you reflect on similarities and differences, you gain a deeper understanding of the items you are comparing, their relationship to each other, and what is most important about them.

Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Chapter 12 mind map ENG 82A


Chapter 12 summaries ENG 82A

Chapter 12 summaries
We ask questions every day to understand and cope with things that happen in our lives. Knowing the causes and effect reasoning that is, he or she analyzes and explain the causes, the effects, or both the causes and the effects of the phenomenon. Writing a cause and effect essay is done by consider what your readers know and think about your subject, think logically which is supported by strong evidence, and test your thinking which is mean to check your main points for clarity ,

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Chapter four summary ENG 82A


Chapter four ENG 82 A – Summary

In this chapter the author is describes a draft as a way of getting material together, and connecting ideas, and also he describes the steps in which you plan out the essay structure and the main writing moves that occur during the development of a piece of writing, in every essay you need to have the beginning, middle, and end. At the beginning it’s important to engage your reader, identify the topic, and get to the point, at the middle you need to cover your main points, raise questions, build interest, and clarify your main point, at the end you need to be able to remind the reader of the purpose, and gain the reader acceptance. Working through the previous steps helps you to find out what you want you’re writing to do, what you want it to say, and how you want to say it.

writing activities exercise page # 62 ENG 82A

Writing activities
Study the chart on page (51). Based on other material you have read or written; add another writing move for each of the three main parts of the essay: opening, middle, and ending. Name the move. Explain it, and tell what types of writing it might appear in?


Conclusion
The conclusion brings closure to the reader, summing up your points or providing a final perspective on your topic.
All the conclusion needs is three or four strong sentences which do not need to follow any set formula. Simply review the main points (being careful not to restate them exactly) or briefly describe your feelings about the topic.

Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Sunday, February 1, 2009

Mind map chapter one ENG 82A


Dear prof,


Kindly find the mind map.


respectfuly yours,

ZAid al thaer.

Chapter one summary ENG 82A

Critical thinking through reading, viewing, and writing


The writer must always develop his text with awareness of readers perspective, and has to know firsthand what good reading is.

we need to think through viewing, to read image actively,and to interpret what is meant by an image, viewing image will be using to identify the general impression and relate the image parts to one another.

critical thinking through through writing must show the ability of thinking critically, be curious and ask why, what is creative,focus, and get involved.

Best regard
Zaid althaher

Chapter two summary ENG 82A

Beginning the writing process

here you will be able to produce essays and papers that reflect your best thinking through the following:
understand the rhetorical situation subject and form, audience-who they are, what they know,and what they need,purpose of the writing,and main action, in order to develop writing that meets the needs, make decision, finding suitable subject and explain what main action you must perform.

Best regards,
Zaid althaher